"A Perfect Day for Bananafish" published in the January 31, 1948
55 Short Stories from The New Yorker
The story is an enigmatic examination of a young married couple, Muriel and Seymour Glass, while on vacation in Florida
At Maxwell’s urging, Salinger embarked upon a major reworking of the piece, adding the opening section with Muriel’s character, and crafting the material to provide insights into Seymour’s tragic demise. Salinger, in frequent consultation with editor Gus Lobrano, revised the story numerous times throughout 1947, renaming it “A Fine Day for Bananafish”.The New Yorker published the final version as “A Perfect Day for Bananafish” one year after Salinger had first submitted the manuscript.
The effort was met with immediate acclaim, and according to Salinger biographer Paul Alexander, it was "the story that would permanently change his standing in the literary community.
The story opens in an upscale seaside hotel room in Florida. A young woman, Muriel Glass, is preening herself while waiting for the hotel switchboard operator to put a long-distance phone call through to her mother. Self-absorbed and complacent, she is “a girl who for the ringing of a phone dropped exactly nothing. She looked as if her phone had been ringing continually since she reached puberty."
Speaking with her mother, the central topic is Muriel’s young husband, Seymour, a World War II combat veteran recently discharged from an Army hospital, where he was presumably evaluated for psychiatric disorders. He has gone down to the beach for the afternoon. The mother-daughter exchange includes a good deal of banter about clothing and fashion, as well as disparaging remarks about the quality of the hotel guests. The mother is disgusted and incensed by reports about her son-in-law's increasingly bizarre and anti-social behavior – acting “funny” – and she persistently warns Muriel that Seymour “may completely lose control of himself”. Muriel dismisses her remarks as hyperbole, regarding her husband’s idiosyncrasies as benign and manageable. Neither of the women express concern that Seymour’s irrational behavior may indicate that he is suffering emotionally.
The scene switches to the beachfront area reserved for hotel clientele. We meet the four- or five-year-old Sybil Carpenter (“She was wearing…a two piece bathing suit, one piece of which she would not be needing for another nine or ten years.") The little girl’s mother, after applying suntan lotion to the child, departs for the hotel lounge to drink martinis. Unsupervised, Sybil seeks out an adult acquaintance, Seymour, who has retreated from the hotel – and his wife – a quarter of the mile away, to lie in solitude on a public beach.
There, the two engage in an intriguing conversation, while Seymour prepares to go for a swim. Sybil selfishly reproaches Seymour for permitting another little girl, the “three and a half” year old Sharon Lipschutz to sit with him while he entertained guests performing on the lounge piano previous nights. Seymour, with mock-seriousness, attempts to placate the spoiled child, but to no avail.
At this impasse, Seymour casually proposes that they "catch a Bananafish," but Sybil coyly insists that Seymour choose between her and Sharon Lipschutz. He gently, yet pointedly, informs her that he observed Sybil abusing a hotel patron’s tiny dog and the chastened girl falls silent. Seymour wades into the ocean and, placing the girl on a rubber raft, proceeds to tell her the whimsical tale – “the very tragic life” – of the bananafish: in their gluttony, they gorge themselves on bananas, and swollen too large to escape their feeding holes, die. The child, unfazed by the story, claims that she sees a bananafish – “six” bananas in its mouth. Seymour affectionately kisses the arch of one of her feet, and returns her to shore, where she departs “without regrets."
Seymour returns to the hotel, where his wife is taking a nap. He retrieves a handgun from his luggage and takes his LIFE
Traumatized by thE WAR Salinger “found it impossible to fit into a society that ignored the truth that he now knew.”
Children figure prominently in Salinger’s works. Seymour’s sympathetic and affectionate interaction with children is contrasted with the detached and phony behavior of adults. In the aftermath of his interlude with Sybil, Seymour “has drawn his own conclusions regarding the makeup of human beings and the world around him” and commits suicide.
T. S. Eliot's The Waste Land and Bananafish
Salinger quotes a verse :
“Ah, Sharon Lipschutz”, said the young man. “How that name comes up. Mixing memory and desire.” He suddenly got to his feet. He looked at the ocean. “Sybil,” he said, “I’ll tell you what we’ll do. We’ll see if we can catch a bananafish.”
“A bananafish,” he said... (emphasis added)
The stanza that contains the verse is from Section I of The Waste Land – “The Burial of the Dead”:
|“||April is the cruelest month, breeding|
Lilacs out of the dead land, mixing
Memory and desire, stirring
Dull roots with spring rain.
The Burial of the Dead begins with an excerpt from Petronius Satyricon which reads: “For once I saw with my own eyes the Cumean Sibyl hanging in a jar, and when the boys asked her, ‘Sibyl, what do you want?’ she answered, ‘I want to die.’”
Slawenski argues that Salinger’s choice of the name for the little girl establishes an “unmistakable” correlation between Eliot’s depiction of the Cumaean Sybil of Greek myth and Seymour’s story of the bananafish. The bananafish are “doomed by greed” and thus share the fate of Eliot’s Sybil, “cursed by relentless existence.